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RightSpicesforCooking
ThroughRevision
Why do I
Here are some sentences revised by the copy
cook so bad?
readers.Seehowthesentenceshavechanged.
Thisisnottoincreasecompetitivenessbutto
retroactthecurrentofthetimes.
This does not increase competitiveness but
actuallygoesagainstthetimes.
Umm... That’s
-CoverStory
because it doesn’t
have the right
Of course,
spices in it.
Itwasnaturalformetopaint.
the main
ingredients are
Paintingcametomenaturally.
what matters
-Rendez-vous
the most.
Therewerefourtablesandtheonewallwas
But I think
the main
fullofbooks.
ingredients
are the most
There were four tables clustered in the
important.
middle, with empty walls, aside from one wall
thatwasfullofbooks.
But the main stuff does
-CultureTrip
not perfect the food.
Afterretrialjudgment,civicgroupforKang’s
honor and recovery, asked me to make a film
torecordtheaffairinformsoffilm.
After a retrial judgment, a civic group
The additional spices
determined to clear Kang’s name and restore
are what makes the
dish stand out.
hishonor,askedmetomakeafilmtorecordthe
affair.
-People
We need to add
Hmm...
something to
That makes sense.
bring out the main
ThecaseofSewolferrywasthatitwasvery
components and
disappointing in the process that the state or
make a change.
societyrespondedaftertheincident.
The case of Sewol ferry was that it was very
disappointingintheprocessofhowthestateor
societyrespondedaftertheincident.
-Feature
ByOhHyun-jae
DepartmentofIndustrialDesign,UniversityofSeoul
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