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Whistleblower
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bad wolf!
Since one of my acquaintances worked as
Stop
first HUFS Police member in 2015, I can
harassing
my sheep!
recognize them that three or four students
patrolthecampusinlateatnight.
Since one of my acquaintances worked as
oneofthefirstHUFSPolicemembersin2015,I
How did he single
can recognize them when I see three or four
out the wolf in disguise?
It was impossible to make
studentspatrollingcampuslateatnight.
out the difference.
-HowAboutYou
Although their works might be of little
That’s
accounted because they just stroll around the
because...
campuswithsmall-talks.
However, their work might be given little
credit because they just stroll around the
campusmakingsmall-talk.
The offended
-HowAboutYou
sheep courageously
The wolves
spoke the truth.
picked on those
I wish the company to grow up in diverse
who would not dare
partsinthenext10or20years.
disclose the truth
at the cost of
risking their
I hope the company will grow into diverse
own lives.
areasinthenext10or20years.
-Visiting
They preyed on
the most powerless.
Thesearesomethemostcommoncomments
easily visible online, all of which is to
contribute that the victim is somehow part of
reasonsofbeingatargetofsexualharassment.
These are some of the most common
One sheep’s
comments easily visible online, all of which
courage
encouraged others
allege that the victim is somehow partly at fault
to speak up.
forbeingatargetofsexualharassment.
-In-depthonCampus
Ifthereisstudent-focusedorganizationabout
school problems, it can continuously keep
Splendid!
watchatissuesonceactivelyconsumedamong
That is certainly
students.
a moral lesson
to learn.
If there was a student-focused organization
for school problems, it could continuously keep
watchonimportantissuesamongstudents.
ByOhHyun-jae
-In-depthonCampus
DepartmentofIndustrialDesign,UniversityofSeoul
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